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Feedback #1
Peer 1 - Janisha
Your portfolio clearly shows strong leadership through a variety of meaningful experiences.
The examples you chose are effective and highlight your growth really well.
To make it even more personal and engaging, consider adding more photos that reflect your leadership.
Changes Made:
- added more photos that connect with my leadership
Feedback #2
Peer 2 - Jugaad
Overall, your portfolio has great information and it really emphasizes what you believe in as a leader.
To make your portfolio even more personal and engaging, try adding photos of the leadership examples you provided.
This can help the reader understand the nature of your experience and what type of leadership you showed.
Changes Made:
- added more photos that does connect with my leadership and text
Feedback #3
Outside Peer - Brother
Your portfolio looks really great, just try spacing our your text more and focus more on looks as well.
Try adding more photos on your portfolio
Make more connections with your life within the text
Changes Made:
- added photos, made more connections,
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